THE SHOCK OF NIGHT by Patrick W. Carr
Story Feels: mild interest, slight worry
Story Strengths: hook, plot, world building, integrating a liturgical church into an imagined world
Story Goofs: writing tells rather than shows, over explaining, supporting characters lack dimension, action does not drive the story
Story Morals: fractured church, why does God choose to bestow more gifts on some?, mental illness, PTSD, how much knowledge is too much knowledge?