Hiya.

I write stories for middle school souls, who deserve better than a culture of hopelessness and indulgence. Browse the blog, Sheepgate, where I give that culture a piece of my mind. TTFN, Emily

THE MAP ACROSS TIME, C.S. Lakin

THE MAP ACROSS TIME, C.S. Lakin

 

1 Star

Story Feels: Anxious for the royal twins for a split second because their mother was poisoned but oh wait she's not really dead.

Story Strengths: Cool ancient language, good description ... G rated?

Story Goofs: Not enough action, poor dialogue, don't believe in the character's decisions.

Story Morals: Solid but ineffective because the reader isn't invested in the story.

THE LAND'S WHISPER, Monica Lee Kennedy

THE LAND'S WHISPER, Monica Lee Kennedy

STORM SIREN, Mary Weber

STORM SIREN, Mary Weber