THE MAP ACROSS TIME, C.S. Lakin
Story Feels: Anxious for the royal twins for a split second because their mother was poisoned but oh wait she's not really dead.
Story Strengths: Cool ancient language, good description ... G rated?
Story Goofs: Not enough action, poor dialogue, don't believe in the character's decisions.
Story Morals: Solid but ineffective because the reader isn't invested in the story.