Hiya.

I write stories for middle school souls, who deserve better than a culture of hopelessness and indulgence. Browse the blog, Sheepgate, where I give that culture a piece of my mind. TTFN, Emily

THE LAND'S WHISPER, Monica Lee Kennedy

THE LAND'S WHISPER, Monica Lee Kennedy

3 Stars

Story Feels: exhausted, grumpy.

Story Strengths: good writing, father/son love story, complicated consciences, well imagined world

Story Goofs: too much traveling and talking, deprived the reader of watching the climax unfold

Story Morals: do not envy the goodness of others, the desire for happiness is universal, trinitarian overtones

THE LEAVES ARE FALLING by Lucy Beckett

THE LEAVES ARE FALLING by Lucy Beckett

THE MAP ACROSS TIME, C.S. Lakin

THE MAP ACROSS TIME, C.S. Lakin